clothes cling
a second skin
nipples hard
like icicles
Author notes
promt 10: soaking rain
In a list
A contest entry
- 9 words... try me :D by Lady Michaella.
490 points, ended January 13, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A great analogy her of her breasts...hard like icicles.. a great indicator of her hightened pleasures to be......
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Wow
What a poem! beautiful in so many ways. Well written.
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paints a picture well
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Good write here
Indeed it does change the body form at times hahaha
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so few words but they paint a vivid picture in my mind! Great job! good luck in the contest.
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thank you Mo...l.o.l so many choices to pick from & I decided on this one.... he he
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this is very beautiful
nice imagery created.
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thanks for the chance to enter...
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GG - This is super! Loved the alliteration, and the imagery is great. You may be long and cool, but you have a talent for the short and hot!
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thanks heaps Bruce... youre becoming a true supporter of my work....Cheers
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uhmm..
oh god the imagery is top rate!! this piece 'bares' alot!! l.o.l. leaves the reader wanting to get dry..NOT!
LOVE THIS LADY!
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down under we call it a wet tee-shirt competition l.o.l
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You invented a word- and it rings danged true! I love it. Noah Webster will be adding to his dictionary! So creative- Gresham
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he he it was on Dictionary.com l.o.l ...I changed it ... thanks G
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Lovely... just lovely.
mmm
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thanks Markie... Welcome Back
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