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Dark Blade

Chromatic,
yet once upon my flesh
waves of warmth.

A contest entry

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  • Grey Mouser
    January 9

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    Biting slowly across the mind, warmth reminds us to feel in it's flowing.
    Well done Angel. Best to you!

    GM


  • Lady Michaella
    January 5

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    oooo, this is beautiful. i notice it is different form before. but this 1 is much better. this is dark and wonderful.
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  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    January 5

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    wow... pretty powerful for just nine words. I wasn't sure I understood this contest, but after clicking a couple of these and seeing that everyone has written in only nine words, I guess I do get it now. ( I thought it was contest#9 and words was the list we were to choose from... duh... best go start the coffee pot huh... don't I feel stupid) Very nice entry and I wish you much luck. Suzi