Succulently waiting
Anticipation
Moist, tasting of honey
Your poison
Author notes
3. kiss..
A contest entry
- 9 words... try me :D by Lady Michaella.
490 points, ended January 13, 68 entries
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What is one thing that stood out in this poem?
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This is great and such a great thought!
Very descriptive and well done with your
nine words! Good luck!
Jeremy0826 -
sweet and to the point...awesome write! jenn
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oooo, this is amazing. so dark and taunting. this is beautiful and done very well.
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Honey and venom could go hand in hand quite vigorously ... its sweet taste could kill in such an intense manner that one cannot truly fathom what just happened to them until it's to late ... short, sweet and to a perfect point by my opinion ...
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As always Gabriel, your words flow with such essence and meaning, I wish I had your brain... Your poetry that you've written completely astounds me...and just leaves me breathless...You're a very talented soul my friend!
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just shows how a beautiful face can be deadly
a honey kiss could be poisonous
loved it
the style too -
Sounds..delicious.
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Delightful! You most definately captured the kiss!
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A kiss is poisonous indeed
great job!!!! Good Luck 
♥ Kathraina
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Love it darlin.
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I had to click on a couple of these entries to make sure I really understood this contest... I guess I do... we really are to write in just 9 words... and you certainly did an impressive write with your nine. Not sure I even wish to go up against you... lol, might have to second guess this contest... he he, very nice entry! Best of luck to you!
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Eh, I'm mediocre at best sometimes, some of these people that write just completely blow my work away, making it look like child's play...yes I realized I just rhymed, no I didn't mean to lol... You should enter, and let me know when you do so that I may return the wonderful favor of a great comment such as yours!
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