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Sick of living.

Emotions bursting,
knife slicing,
gone.

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SilentTearsOnceMore.

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    March 5

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    Hummz, Put a Sharp one in me too

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 9

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    I hope you dont feel this way now but if you do i am here for you i like your haiku it tells the reader alot im sorry that you did not win in the contest i think it was a winner


  • August Starlight silver member
    January 7
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    It's so powerful, yet so short.


  • Hikari Lady
    January 6

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    So short and deep. I really found so many emotions in just few words, a great work indeed.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • fernandafreire
    January 5

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    So little words. With so much and deep emotions.
    Good job


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 5
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    very deep, with sadness profound.

    ♥ Kathraina

  • michaeline
    January 5

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    I hope that these words are only for the contest and not something that you are doing or contimplating doing.Good luck to you in the contest,hope you win.


  • She burns
    January 5

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    so touching, you explained, everything so well

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