My Whole World
Shuts Down
Until You Come
Back
Author notes
When she's gone
20 poets
9 words
A contest entry
- can you speak volumes with 9 words? by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended January 5, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Powerful
Now this was incredible writing.
I could feel the passion and yearning
within the words. Ironically enough the
spaces in between the lines were filled
to capacity. Excellent work!
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Wowzers~
Oh My Love the emotions in this piece~
Excellent in 9 words- especially the last line-
suspense built from first line all the way through
Bravo!!
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
~ Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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nicely done...emotional and beautiful
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i am so proud of you dear OMG! i love it honey and congrads on the green hell it should have been bronze crap! ((kisses))
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Very nice words here my friend. They definately speak volumes to me. congrats on the HW. Keep up the great work.
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Very good candy girl, congrats on the Honorable Mention.
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excellent!!
A great nine words lady, you nailed it.
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Smooth!
I know this is short but it reminds me of Def Jam poetry! Very well written! Watch: Penny For Your Thoughts on Youtube sometime! It's incredible! -
I relate this to my daughter who lives in another state ~ in fact this whole contests was in dedication to her... x
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Wow
You totally grab the heart with your choice of words. So very powerful. Best of luck in the contest.
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Deeply beautiful and a wonderful
thought here my dear friend! Good
luck and it's great to read you once
again!
Jeremy0826
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