Split the two goddess and sever man kind
with the hart of two.
self to self and life to life.
white as gold kind of heart and
time is main as one, but not all.
Bless-the time that good would over
come any-thing that
comes from the heart.
Red of fire and cold ice and tired of
right but being wrong. Evil is appear
to the end and raise from the top
of the belly of the beast to horn
of man ears.
teas not to the man ear but.
Connor the man thoughts and
feeling to betray the one thing
that is not right in the eye's of
the master.
lower the status of the man to remove
the will of thought and emotion of man
kind. No good thought can come and remove
the plains that's already been done by evil.
Author notes
do you have a little person talking to you say-ing that's wrong and go back and fix it
but some-thing else tell you that it's ok to bad cause if you dont someone else will and they would come out on top while you work all day and it never come.
well this what this poem is doing the two goddess is split into the bad and the good
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900 points, ended January 6, 2009, 108 entries
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THE TO GODDESS (GOOD AND EVIL)
Comments
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this interesting syntax here makes a person think that an otherworldly person is speaking or thinking, I found the part about lowering the emotions apt because people who have been put-down often don't care how they hurt others or cruelty begets cruelty.
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