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Along The Shore

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Along the shore
Where our love had been before
We walked along side by side
Gazing at the tide

We always came here to find peace
And to let tension release
It was our little haven
Where we stopped behavin'

We could be free
And shout with glee
Instead of worrying about the rest of the world
Into which we were hurled

Along the shore
Our hearts and souls would soar
It was where we could let go
And let our happiness flow

Author notes

I chose the first pic as my inspiration because i've had a poem about a beach stirring my head for a while, but wasn't sure what to write. When I saw the prompt I knew right away!

I want this poem to portray the feelings of just letting go. Being free. Serenity. (and somewhat love, but mostly the other)
♥ kathraina

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  • Symphony
    February 19

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    I felt that this was a little forced in places with the rhyming scheme, BUT

    You created such a magical sounding place on the beach. I myself have a place like that - where I do a course each year, and it completely relaxes and rejuvenates me; a slice of heaven, we call it -

    and you could have been describing it here!

    Great job, thanks for entering


  • ToxicSuicide
    January 10

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    Awww! Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck! My favorite part would have to be,
    "Along the shore
    Our hearts and souls would soar
    It was where we could let go
    And let our happiness flow"
    ~ToxicSuicide.


  • wakawaka05
    January 6

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    What a great write. I like your take on the prompt. Best of luck ing the contest and in future writing. Have a Happy New Year!
    Caity
    >Wakawaka<


  • Daisy Ballerina
    January 6
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    Very beautiful!


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    January 5

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    "We could be free
    And shout with glee
    Instead worrying about the rest of the world
    Into which we were hurled"

    my favorite part, thank you and good luck

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