Swept away by
the strings that once
echoed in tune
[so sweetly they played their song]
Listen now to the screech
of my heart that cries
for you.
-- Off tune.
Author notes
Option two --
http://frozenstarro.deviantart.com/art/Careless-57141026#
30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- 12/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended January 7, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i loved this! great write.
my favorite part:
listen now to the screech
of my heart that cries
for you.
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HOODWINKED
I clearly see why this earned a trophy: it is exceptionally well written and speaks volumes in so few words; which is not always an easy task. Very well done, Claire!
Luv in Christ, BonnieQ
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wow this is an fantastic poem that you've written. I really loved it especially the last stanza. wow the imagery that you've created with your words is excellent.
good luck
kat
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"[so sweetly they played their song]"
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well worth the wait- you put out your best, huh?!
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"foot tapping, hand on chin- waiting patiently..."
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I'm done now 
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Let me know when you are done.
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Done
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