It was dark but I knew what I was doing.
Our lips met, having me burning with passion.
In an instant I was fine but the next I was powerless.
I had some control but it was soon replaced with pure pleasure.
I tossed him on the bed trying to gain control.
Straddling him was one option but was too helpful on his part.
I fought long and hard to stay sober but was drugged by my wants.
Finally I gave in and let him have his way with me.
His hot, sweet lips kissed every curve of my body.
I moaned in enjoyment only helping with his.
The thrill of it all had me craving for more.
I couldn't help it any more.
I wanted him and i wanted him now.
I tried gathering my senses ready to return the favor.
So I flipped him around and ripped off his shirt.
His belt was next and soon after was his pants.
My tongue traveled from his neck to inner thigh.
Touching every single curve in between.
He was powerless and under my control now.
He moaned in enjoyment only helping me with mine.
He grabbed me and pulled me in close.
Both powerless to each other, no more games were being played.
Pure pleasure and wish fulfillment were in control now.
Mountains moved and time stopped only for us.
Me and him both will never the unforgettable pleasures we shared that night.
Author notes
My inspiration was my boyfriend.
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Steamy. Goodluck
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I liked this, ty for entering and gl in all the contests!
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Tension, sensation and a lot of passion. Whew! All wrapped into one, you made one hell of a heat wave. Thanks so much for entering. This was great. It had imagery, which was a big plus. It had a hot bam to it and you lit it up with all the fiery passion.
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there's nothing like someone's final surrender.
When you finally give in to someone. Very descriptive and lots of emotion. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for entering my contest...novy
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I have some issues with the grammar in this, but will a little work you could have quite a piece.
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Very intoxicatingly written! love this one. Good Job! Thanks for entering the contest. Best wishes to you.
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awesome poem, thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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I like the almost complete rejection of form, rhyme, and meter... and the "every-line-is-a-sentence" thing, haven't seen that in a while.
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Very nice...thank you so much for entering!
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this was a very nice poem here i really enjoyed this a whole lot had erotica and a whole lot of romance good luck in the contest
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That was great. A lot passon in there.
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wow
now this was hella hot
my god get me a fan over here
this was incredible
gees now i want to call my bf lol
this was... is discriptive
i almost felt like i was there
great job!!!
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Thank you for your deeply sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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What a passionate night! You have my mind
working & what can I say..it was an enjoyable read.
Take care.
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wow, this is wonderfull
it's so full of passion, and emotion, and it sure is rather hott
well written, good imagery, lovely piece
well done, thanks for entering and good luck
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Passion to the extreme!!! Very nice write of desire!
Best of luck in the contest!
Az
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