As rich as chocolate pudding
in a quaint vanilla malt
will come a love unending
based on the 'real, raw' deal.
The facades will not be needed
the adornment will be truth
in all its freshest colours
down to its precious roots.
The seasons will be friendly
for a new tide has come in.
The day of all beginnings
I will have finally found my lover.
You may not like his etchings
for you there may not be much appeal,
but your heart is not the one wretched
'tis my heart on the silver platter.
'Tis my heart that was uniquely burdened
for the long hold out it withstood
it'll be my heart only that's eased
when he comes along beside me.
He'll not need the proverbial flower
the 'white' horse or shiny sword.
My heart will know it is swooning
when his 'touch' reaches heights unheard.
A contest entry
- a new wind of love by adsaige.
900 points, ended January 28, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Mmmm beautiful poem !!
It'll be my heart only that's eased
When he comes along beside me .
Right on the money !! Great read !
Best wishes & hugs ! Friend Easy
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Judged
Although I did enjoy this write immensely, I ask you to review the rules and alter your write accordingly, or I will have to DQ it.
Thank you for entering. Good luck.
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Sorry about that, I think I have altered it enough, sometimes I get lost in the poetry itself - hope its not too late
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I can't really tell you which lines I enjoyed the most because I would have to quote too many. Your last lines reverberate what I would wish for in such a beautiful way. A soul love!
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Thank you so kindly for this elegant review...I like those kinds
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This is sweet, full of hope and flows with gentle expectations. good luck
ken
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Thank you wildly, Ken, I adore this review lots of love.
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