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to you dark angel

i see an angle with dark wings
i am the one to blame
i am the fiend that hurt her

i will find her attractive
she slices with a dark shiv
i hope she lives to see life at its best

i have made a mess but i try to help
i felt her hart as my own
she rocked my body like a cyclone

i love it when she calls my phone
i hate when she is alone with out me
she  shows hope in me

i hope she will see i care for her as a sister
i twisted her to much to leave
i hope she can see the happiness of life

i strife to show her life
i loved that she put down the knife
i still hope she stops trying to end her life

i wish she would have fifed me
to bad i got a wife to be
you were life to me

i foresee hope but at what cost.

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  • depressed20emo
    January 9

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    wow

    I'm in tears thankyou very much. its really pretty and i know how hard you try to help me. but i think that i need to know that you are going to be able to let go as well i am. but i really think its beautiful

  • ApathysEnemy
    January 4

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    agreed... minus the fact that u still spelled angel angle.. other than that.. no clappys 4 this one