Somewhere inside of me are things sleeping that need woken up but can't wake them up. My memories need to be awaken for all i remember is alot of darkness and dispair. Depressing memories and also angry memories. The good ones I barely remember. I try my hardest to remember them but I can't picture them anymore. My heart saddens because of this and I get depressed about it. I wish something could wake them up before they all disappear as i age. If it don't happen soon I will be in this state of darkness forever. Please i want my good memories back I don't want anymore excuses of why I can't remember them. They keep saying I was too young to remember certain things I don't think I was I think I put them to sleep never to awaken. Now as I grow older I am trying to wake these sleeping memories but it won't work. I want to remember them I gotta remember them or else i'll never truly know who i am. Please bring these memories back to me so that I can be brought back to life
A contest entry
- Emotional Wreck by ToxicSuicide.
750 points, ended January 11, 34 entries
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This was great, but it seemed more of a journal entry than a poem. Thank you for entering anyways though! Good luck.
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well I must say this was quite a powerful write from you Ms. Kitty. I do like the over all flow and the point to the poem as well. anyw ays your poem is very depe and quite dark in its own way and yet I find it to be quite tastefully written to the point that I like it. any ways just a brilliant well penned poem and well this reminds me of a song but I can't say it because I think im wrong
anyw ays a nice write

Your ole,
Mr. Tiger




