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Somewhere inside of me are things sleeping that need woken up but can't wake them up.  My memories need to be awaken for all i remember is alot of darkness and dispair.  Depressing memories and also angry memories.  The good ones I barely remember.  I try my hardest to remember them but I can't picture them anymore.  My heart saddens because of this and I get depressed about it.  I wish something could wake them up before they all disappear as i age.  If it don't happen soon I will be in this state of darkness forever.  Please i want my good memories back I don't want anymore excuses of why I can't remember them.  They keep saying I was too young to remember certain things I don't think I was I think I put them to sleep never to awaken.  Now as I grow older I am trying to wake these sleeping memories but it won't work.  I want to remember them I gotta remember them or else i'll never truly know who i am.  Please bring these memories back to me so that I can be brought back to life

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  • ToxicSuicide
    January 10

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    This was great, but it seemed more of a journal entry than a poem. Thank you for entering anyways though! Good luck.
    ~ToxicSuicide.

  • well I must say this was quite a powerful write from you Ms. Kitty. I do like the over all flow and the point to the poem as well. anyw ays your poem is very depe and quite dark in its own way and yet I find it to be quite tastefully written to the point that I like it. any ways just a brilliant well penned poem and well this reminds me of a song but I can't say it because I think im wrong anyw ays a nice write

    Your ole,
    Mr. Tiger