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Friends to the End

Scratch away, you can slice away
and pass away if you want to

What to do? Best if we were through
You can go but I have to stay

Protect my health, you can disect yourself
and commit to shit, I won't stop you

What to do? Guess we are through
I will stay and you run away

Will you stay? Please and come and play
With me today and I won't hate you

What to do? Yes we are through
You can stay but I'm moving away

The day you die
You're leaving me for death
So don't waste your breath with
               ...Goodbye

Author notes

I wrote this about a friend I used to have named Stanley Gladstone. We were pretty close and he was suicidal but I never really thought he was serious. When my parents split up we had to move away and shortly after. He hung himself.
Written February 12th, 2004

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  • aeolia
    December 10, 2007

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    I'm sorry for your loss. I've had a friend die, and while she didn't commit suicide, that feeling of losing someone hurts like a motherf*cker. I hope everything has gotten better for you.

    This could be a bit easier to follow with some punctuation, wherever it's necessary. Also, you don't need to capitalise the first word of every line unless you've started a new sentence.

    Thanks for the entry!

    --Cristina


  • MisJudged
    March 15, 2005
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    omg. that is so sad. i cant believe he hung himself. im so sorry. it was a great poem though and it was great for my contest! it was awesome. you really have a great talent. keep it up.
    MisJudged

  • sk8rgrlk89
    February 23, 2004
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    Great job, I know how that must feel to lose a friend like that and I am deeply sorry for you. But you just have to live life to the fullest and it you ever find out that someone is suicidal then try and talk to them immediatly. Great poem and good luck in the contest.

  • TheColorofBlood
    February 21, 2004
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    Wow.. thats really powerful > i myself have dealt with the same thing and it hurts immensly... Sometimes tho.. its so unnexpected.. and. it jsut sneaks up on you. Thats why when you know people like that... you have to address it right away. I am sorry for you rloss. Thanks or entering tho... Good luck..
    Blood----<3

  • evilemochild
    February 21, 2004
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    omg that is so sad... the poem is sad what your friend did must of reallllllllly hurt you.. that sux... nice poem
    ~amandy~

  • msjct06
    February 12, 2004
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    i'm not sure i understand...could you explain...please thanks

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