The breeze flows upon my tangled hair causing crystallized strands
My feet tingle with cold, frozen by the snow
Yet my heart feels warm, with the thoughts of you
For the love I have for you, there are no limits
I would die a thousand deaths and would still be in love with you
Every new life you would remain in my heart
To relive that first look of love in your eyes
To feel that first kiss that remains upon my lips forever
To hold you with that first embrace of love in each other’s arms
The birds sing a song of passion upon snowy wings
Fluttering from the cold hoping for a warming breeze
As the snow covers the ground with a pearl white glaze
The river is still frozen unable to flow with nature
As I remain swinging above the waters for an eternity
Nothing and no one can take this love from me
The breeze flows upon my tangled hair causing crystallized strands
My feet tingle with cold, frozen by the snow
Author notes
4. Long hair and frozen feet
A contest entry
- Wondering Eyes Of Poets by hollowriver.
520 points, ended January 17, 2009, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This poem is beautifully written great imagery and great tone. I feel as if I'm actually inside her head and experiencing the same whirlwind of emotions she is! Fantastic write
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This poem is beautifully written great imagery and great tone. I feel as if I'm actually inside her head and experiencing the same whirlwind of emotions she is! Fantastic write
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fantastic
Its fantastic
Oh a sweet read, touching.
I smiled from the imagery. The story was so relevant to the picture and Title. I loved how it was made into a dark fantasy love story, like a fairy tail. I hope he comes to get her off that swing or she will freeze. lol
thank you so much for entering.
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Pretty.
Very pretty words, Mom. Always great to see you writing again. Hope you had an awesome holiday because I certainly did.
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a nice take on the promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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Gotta take another shot at this- I got hung up in the words- so pretty.
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Frozen from head to toe, but with a hot heart still beating within; quite a vivid presentation Lisa. Your write is uplifting and a testament to commitment and hope. but with a melancholy undertone as well.
Many of us are frozen in time, waiting for the warmth to return.
Brazos
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