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Life was not fare with me

            some times I wonder if I'm the only one of my kind
                  or are there others created by mankind

              some times I feel so a shame of who I became
                   there is no one to blame besides me 
          well thats what I heard that I'm alone because of my own 
                                actions and I agree 
                           whats wrong with me
           its seems that every one else is having fun besides me
    em I seeing the same world though my eyes as every one else
               or is there something wrong with mine
         maybe I was assign to this world for a different task
                maybe that task is to be alone and sad
                   I only stole to feed my little sister 

          couldnt any one see , that was the only way to stay alive

                to do things that were not supose to be done

           I was to young to work and I could go back to school

                   I lived in the streets but no one cared

                poeple never helped me they just criticize

                every time we were seen people just laugh

                     couldnt they see I was suffering

                     coulnt they see that I needed help!

             I was'nt in this condition because I wanted to

                    life is'nt fare and people that say it is

                                well all I can say

                      is that life was'nt fare whith me

               my parents were killed, so were my brothers

                  they were all killed ,right in front of me

                I was fifteen and didnt know what to do

              all I knew was that I need to get out of here

                         so I ran away with my sis

               ran far away until I couldn't go any further

                   I thought that was the end of me

                        but I couldnt leave my sis

                            not yet at least

                     I fed her for a couple of days

                         then I left her whith a

                     lady that seen good enough

                      I wished her the best of luck

                     now I could rest in peace

                knowing my sis is some where safe

            I dont care what happens to me any more

       so come world, I'm waiting, come to me and give

      your best shot and dont stop until theres nothing left

       I'm not needed here any more, I give you my life now

                          COME AND GET IT!!!

 

 

 

 

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  • this piece is stunning!
    way to go!
    nela


  • Nebiros
    January 10
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    That is a great and powerful poem. You are a wonderful poet, far better then I could ever be


  • fernandafreire
    January 5

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    Wow. This is a very powerful poem and I wonder if that is your true story? Because if it is, I am sorry to hear that you went through a rough patch, I am sorry to hear that your suffered and no one could see that.

    Thanks for sharing this poem at ap
    May light and joy be always with you!!

    Fayfreire

    • vamp-angel
      January 8
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      thanks. no i didn't but i wrote it to everyone else who is going through this.
      some times I'm in pain and no one notices but i no its nothing compare to others who have really suffer and actually know what the word pain means.

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