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Dancing in the Mystical Circus

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Dancing in the mystical circus
I find myself ready to surface
Such freedom can be found
In twirling round and round
But the mystical circus isn't just for dancing
Its for anything and everything
Be who you want to be
And don't be afraid of others being able to see
Do as you want to do
And freedom your soul flies through
Mythical creatures come to life
And the shadows shift in strife
Magical things happen in this place
And the happiness you feel will never erase

Author notes

The pic for this prompt is awsome! I was immediately drawn to the idea of a mystical circus! (idk why....but it's different right?)

♥ Kathraina

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  • Symphony
    February 19

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    i LOVE the picture, it makes ME want to jump right into it -

    And you went with the flow, creating such a magical place; can I go there too?

    What more to say - this was just so tempting,

    "And the shadows shift in strife" <-- I loved how you worded that, there was something very creative, and unique about it!

    Thanks for entering


  • ConjurerCaptainTam
    January 29

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    The picture is just dazzling! Aww pretty poem, nicely put together. But it seemed like the last sentance you wrote was focused more on trying to find a suitable rhyme, rather than what you were wanting to say.

    All in all, lovely read, thanks for sharing.

    Tammy x


  • fairytalelovestory
    January 19
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    this is very nice. the imagery it presents is very beautiful


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 10

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    Sounds like a beautiful and wonderful
    place to find yourself in. I love your title
    and the way that you described this place.
    Lovely work here and I enjoyed reading it.
    Keep up the wonderful work here and
    good luck to you with this entry!




    Jeremy0826

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 7
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    Wow

    I love this one, fantastic match to the picture. Well done.


  • MizaLePiza silver member
    January 5
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    Hehehe! Loved this mucho! Bravo!


  • Faded Existence
    January 4

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    'Tis different indeed! And a very wonderful write! I loved this. It just made me all happy inside . I was in a terrible... terrible...........terrible!!! mood before I read this... thanks so much for your entry and good luck!

    -Faded


  • Darkwell
    January 4

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    i really like your world you painted here and i wish i was in that world beautiful trophy worthy poem

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