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what do I think of the world today......

As the bombs fall,
As our brave soilders,
Out there praying for it to stop,
Countries at war when not need,
why are we fighting?


When the world trade centers fell,
What did we learn?
Anything,
Someone thought they could change the world,
But have they?


Why can we change the world?
But some of us thought we couldnt but we can,
We don't need the law to change countries,
What we need is help, hope, and love,


Some poeple no who I am,
People know what my dreams are,
But  only one knows what i wanted to,
But he was killed in the terroist attack,
I say prays at to hope my world will be better,


I won't give up my fight to change my world,
We all want peace,
Yet countries are poor,
We fight for them,
But our people don't care.

Some day this world will change.
or won't it,
it make us wonder,
poeple out there today go mad due to the wars,
but are they fighting to keep countries in right poistion?
where they need?

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 4, 2009

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    this is so true

    but will it be to late for our generations to enjoy
    the freedoms of our country again? very thoughtful ...thank you for this entry, good luck
    Sparks