distance drifts on thoughtful breezes
elongating shadows
creating valleys
too wide for minds to cross
and too deep for hearts
to surrender into
Author notes
"to be afraid" by diana debord
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A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 22. by KyleBerg.
875 points, ended January 4, 2009, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What a n adorable poem.
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Imagery and metaphor here are simply breath-taking. I also really like your presentation, which I believe is an important aspect of poetry that is sometimes neglected. A wonderful piece with a powerful message.
Thanks for entering
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