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Musical Chairs


Eternal traveller

dangerously enchanting

trappings of unequivocal pleasure

revealing an occupational hazzard

of no coexistence...






...reservation for one.



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18 words.

Picture credit: Auditorium for Souls by rosiehardy @ flickr

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  • Walk-Free
    January 7
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    "reservation for one"

    BRILLIANT

    thanks so much for entering and all the best!

  • bstfrnd
    January 6
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    wow, nice take on the prompt ,I think you meant "unequivocal" and coexistence".