take me to that time
again
the time I know
has gone
take me to that time
with you
take me to that time
A contest entry
- 12 lines or less by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended January 4, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Personally, I think there is too much repetition for such a short piece.
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