You are the light to my darkness,
The calm to my storm,
The hope to my despair…
I adore you,
I crave you,
I need you…
Embrace this fallen Angel
And let not the heavens,
Sate our passions…
Hold me,
Kiss me,
Love me…
You reflect me in desire,
You mirror me in thought,
You share my abilities…
Dream of me,
Feel me,
Touch me…
I knew you would come,
Tear my world asunder,
Bring me to my knees…
Awaken my soul,
Enflame my heart
Stir my passions…
Long have we walked this path,
Destinies entwined by fate,
Convergance unseen...
Always waiting,
Never knowing,
Ever lonely...
I walked in the darkness,
Amidst the dead and the dying,
Broken to my purpose…
You found me,
You held me,
You saved me…
Now I can’t live without you…
Author notes
Category 3: Write me a love poem...One that will reach down into the depths of my soul and pull out something magnificently beautiful...This is your chance to take my breath away..
I commented on 3am
For Pastel... 
Thank you for pic to draw from...
Artist unknown, if anyone does know, let me know & I'll credit them...
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- Love, does it really exist? by geckogirl.
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Comments
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Fritz is easily one of the most amazing, inspiring poets on AP... win win win
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Very sensual and emotional write. The imagery is awesome. Good luck in the contest. God bless
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Wow. This poem has such power and passion within its words. I love how it touched the heart so strongly. Excellent job my friend.
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Long have we walked this path,
Destinies entwined by fate,
Convergance unseen...
Always waiting,
Never knowing,
Ever lonely...
This is exactly what I am looking for..Thank you so much for entering it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE remember to include the other poem in the contest you entered. I DO NOT want to have to DQ this poem :0) Good luck !
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Interesting...
Pretty neat piece...I like this part the most "You reflect me in desire,
You mirror me in thought" It catch my whole attention...
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Oh this is pretty good, I adore you I crave you I need you, kiss me feel me love me touch me I just lov these lines. Thank you for entering and sharing
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Oh! How lovely...the timbre of this piece is laced with a dark beauty that binds itself to the image you have chosen. Painted upon a pallet of the darkest blues and grays...scrumptious...
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full of emotions.. thanks for entering
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I Love angels
That was very pretty
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That is beautiful. Wow the picture you paint is surreal. The mere essence I seek. You have a way drawing one in. Loved it. Excellent.
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Love and Light reaches through the darkness. I loved how sensual and raw this is. Thank you for sharing!
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Magnificent loving poem, I adore it...
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beautiful and very well written. I love the emotions.
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love is hard, i can imagine. i relate to your poem very much, and i once had a hard time letting him go. he was wonderful but things had to go south, so i moved on to something different. hope someday you get a chance to show your work and win a trophy. thank you for sharing.
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What a beautiful love story so heartfelt. Your amazing write touched me deeply. Finding ones true love makes everything worth while. I know I was one of the lucky ones to have found my Angel my hubby Jason. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talents. Have a blessed week my dear friend, hugs Theresa
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wow.
wow.
that's about it. just - wow. it does carry favor with me, Fritz. thank you for sending it to me. . .
powerful and stunning and very fresh and flowing and - wow. wonderful picture too. . .
Definitely three clappies for me dear friend Fritz!
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This was amazing. Very different from the other enteries i recieved. Loved the storytelling and the imagery. The repitition helped it to flow too. Great job and good luck in the contest!
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A truly great write you have here. I really love the flow to it. Your choice of words are good too. And it is very romantic (at least to me). Only one thing. The rules, if you notice say you have to have only left align. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. -
Love this...reminds me of a good friend...
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stunning
have to catch my breath
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A stunning picture and a wonderfully fitting write for it!
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Really lovely, I have become such a fan of yours with all the styles of writing. Romantic, dramatic and always flawless. Sheila
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Sheesh now I need a box of tissue. Kinda like watching a love story. Another beautiful poem!
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this is so truly romantic and soooo very beautiful big brother!!! I love it!!!! You did a very very lovely job with this piece its so very very sweet!!!! I love u!!!
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Aww this poem savors the heart and soul
Its deep emotional and meaningful
Love is within the dark, yet the light shines for you
Well written and a softer side of you radiates
Loved it hun
Julie x
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WOW! What a beautifully expressed poem about the one you love. I am sure Pastel loves this. You have woven words that appear more like a magic spell.. an incantation..calling to your lover. Bravo!
Mariana
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An excellent take on the picture. Your words drew me right in, beautifully penned.
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Hypnotic, yes a great word
to describe this piece
It is so beautiful so surreal
and enchanting
you took me away
Thank you
~Pastel
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Beautiful words to go with a beautiful picture.
Such a soft piece, as I read it sounded like a whisper in my head........ The short three lines at the end of each verse give it an almost hypnotic quality.
A very deep and passionate read, well done.
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