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Ridicule This!

Prisoners for our own safety,
What Is Humanity?
By the next guy with an ego and a gun.
I see the moonlight alive in your eyes
Spring plumerias and mangoes blooming,
America, land of equality
Love Is A Fancy Way of Saying Pain
She'll bounce thrice and then depart,
Just goes to show I'm born to be a lonely man
Wow! The first and last two make sense!

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That's an interesting idea. I like it.

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  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    January 4
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    Thanks for the entry and good luck... love the BG lol


  • Antipodi
    January 4

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    I think life is rediculas else hwy am I here ..yah got me thinkin with this eggcellent piece of prose