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Plural

Shit

Dam

No wait
Plural
Dams spilling
Because of an unexpected stimulus 

My head hurts
Trying desperately to find the words
That are echoing explosively
Around me making
My heart hurt

Falling fast
Through the rhythm
That beats beats
All around me
Except for the occasional moments
When you have me
Falling Slowly

I have no contingency plan
Wait plural
Any kind of any plans

Rush of affection
Washes over me
I love you
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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 1
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    This is really interesting & diffrent, I really enjoyed it! It's worth reading again & again (: