Forbidden fruit proffered,
I taste your succulence
and feel the lust
flow excitingly.
Oblivious, the gouges on
my soul are overlooked
as I smolder in the
dark flavors of you.
Author notes
Option 2.
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://fallenangel-089.deviantart.com/art/Rotten-45557713
30 Words
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by AngelKat42.
950 points, ended January 4, 2009, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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Mmm.. dark, sensual.
Great take on the prompt
Very well done, congrats on the silver.
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Dark and sinfully delightful. Congratulations on the silver.
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a beautifully dark poem that you've written. I really love this poem a lot. I love the second stanza.. and I love the first. the imagery is excellent and powerful
good luck
kat
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wow a very powerful take onthe promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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Nice job on this. It is a very darkly sensual poem. Very well done.
Mike
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This is dark and yet very great too.
Best of luck to you with this.
Riftkin
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I will come back
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