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.I Want To Be Ready.

That song apprises something wretched deep inside.
A thousand memories engraved, hidden below the surface.
The only part of me that feels completely right.
A part of me that feels so alive.

The sudden fire that surges through my veins
Burns an addiction, an obsession well-masked.
It uproots the emotions I forgot I could feel,
Igniting a longing to once more relive those days.


Scorched through the core with reminiscent dawn
A smile sparks, a moment of complete bliss.
I wish I could contain the incandescence forever,
But past defeats me, those days are long gone.

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Well I Wouldnt Have Any Notes.

I Just Wrote What Came To My Head. xD

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  • Horrific Hollis
    January 8

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    Wow. This has so much meaning and depth. I can totally relate. I really love the second stanza. This is amazing. =]


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 4
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    great write...and awesome ending good luck to ya


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 4
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    This is a tidy poem that wraps itself around the subject. Nice. Shancy.