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Can't You Trust Me

For some reason,
No one see's what I see.
What accumulates on me, but

For some reason. To everyone 

Else, it is not even there.

I can no longer eat. 

And you say you can't trust me to 

Do what I am told.

Have i offically lost your trust?

Do you hate me now?

You think I am beautiful. 

Alot of people do.

But I no longer care about what you think.

It is my opinion about myself that matters.

My opinion that sticks to my mind like glue.

Again...

You can't trust me to have a

"Positive image"

All I want to do is lose weight.

That's the one thing you can trust me to do.

A few pounds here...

A few extra pounds there.

It's not a big deal to lose weight.

The worst thing in the world is to be fat.

I will accomplish my goal.

No matter what it takes......

I WILL be skinny. A stick.

I am ever so willing to die, 

As long as I die skinny.

Trust me.

 

 

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  • nobodys-girl
    February 1

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    wow... i know a lot of people who would rather die then be fat. this is just amazing. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck.


  • starving4perfection
    January 10

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    wow...this really had a meaning for me. i can soo relate aswell =[ im sorry your going through that though hun! i really hope you get better and if you wanna talk about it im here =]


  • Thendestinystruck
    January 5
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    this is wonderful! very strong write !


  • Justmenow
    January 4

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    omg so powerful, it is amazing it tells the real feelings of an eating disorder and cuts the crap tht many people surround it with, it is sad but yet brilliant well done


  • Eldrich Capricorn
    January 4

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    I'm a guy and I struggle with weight issues everyday. Although it's not as common for men to obsess about their fat, it's definitely something I do. Very emotional piece that effects me personally.

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