The pain seeping from my heart,
spills into the limbs of my body.
Through my veins it flows,
like black hatred poison.
It causes my soul to rot,
along with the flesh,
of my now dying love.
I wish for some charming prince,
to find my tiny body,
and see the wound,
I wish for him to drop his blood red lips,
and suck the poison from my heart.
Save me from this pain, and misery.
We can ride away,
into the sunset,
and never come back,
Never look back into the horrible past,
that haunts us both.
Maybe, just maybe, my darling,
"we can be the king and queen of all Ive ever seen...."
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amazing!
i know how u feel,
im still waiting for my prince charming.
i think he got lost somewhere...
dont worry, love will find you.
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I really like the poem, great use on word choice,Oh and before i forget, Not all Knights in Shinning armor can make your dreams come true. ^_^.
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best
Like it the best so far. Get a touch more detail in the metaphors. As the others have said it plays out like a book or movie. Believable and real. It is solid.
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Thank you darling :]
It would seem you have a thing for metaphors.
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Wow, this is stunning. For real. I love the the part about sucking the poison from your heart, that was powerful. And the ending is amazing! <3
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Thank you, Thank you!
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LIke it alot Cady...I love the imagery it played out in my mind like a book! Loved it...and nice pic lol
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ooooo i loveeeee it! lol good job
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Thanks.
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is tht a pic of u?
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