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Abuse.

The sharpness of his words,
and the quickness of his mind,
hurt worse than kicks and punches.
The raw emotion and truth cuts me heart,
and leave another scar on my soul.
He more he says, the more the stitches come out.
There is no more back up.

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  • jeffstofsky
    January 11

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    I like the raw emotion you brought to this piece, i was abused too not a bf or gf my drunk ass dad but i can still relate to this, i love how you brought it to life