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The Moon

the moon whispers softly,
secrets of the night,
and casts eerie shadows,
in the absence of light.

your crawling, and calling my name in the darkness...
your eyes follow me where i go...

your on the prowl
your hunting me down
your going in for the kill
and im lying here,
bleeding,
in your arms.
you tore my heart out,
its still beating
in your hands.

as time's, ticking onwards,
endlessly constant,
the fiend, we call love,
is getting much stronger.

your crawling, and calling my name in the darkness...
your eyes follow me where i go...

your on the prowl
your hunting me down
your going in for the kill
and im lying here,
bleeding,
in your arms.
you tore my heart out,
its still beating
in your hands.

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  • Justmenow
    January 4

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    more of song lyrics i feel and the yours shoulod be you're other than that it is a good poem with a good story to tell, keep up the good writing