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You Said Goodbye.

looking back to when, we were friends,
its sad to see that it was all pretend.
don't turn around, don't call my name,
its your fault that everythings changed.

you made me cry,
when you said goodbye,
and you always lie,
so just walk on by.

you took me to the park,let me play till dark.
and you pushed me on the swings,just to hear me laugh.
i put you on a pedestal,i looked you to you,
i thought that there was nothing, you couldn't do.

you made me cry,
when you said goodbye,
and you always lie,
so just walk on by.

you've got your son, you've got your life,
you have your stupid F***ing wife...
i hope that you are happy now,
but don't turn around and ask me how, you lost us.

so now i am grown,i made it on my own.
i didn't have a father figure, waiting at home.
its funny how things became so strained,
i wonder if you still know my name?

you made me cry,
when you said goodbye,
and you always lie,
so just walk on by.

say goodbye, say goodbye, walk on by, please don't cry...

you said goodbye...

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  • Justmenow
    January 4

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    i loved the reputition like a chorus and i liked this poem as it tells of such loss of love well done on a great write