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Need A Real Cock

I'm getting very tired
of my rubber cock.
I desperately need
a real one that's hard as a rock.

Two months of play
with just a vibrating toy.
Is way too long
I no longer enjoy.

It can't suck on my nipples
or kiss on my neck.
Can't give me loving
or keep me in check.

And even though
it can't give me any lip
The foreplay it always
seems to want to skip.

I need the touch of a real man
upon my blazen skin.
My patience with this life
is really wearing thin.

I need a real live cock
to fill a hole or two.
Attached to a real live MAN
who would enjoy the view.

But the pleasure would not
be just all mine.
His smile I assure you
will most certainly shine.

When he feels this tight, hot pussy
engulf his big hard cock.
And suck his juices dry
His world I would rock.

I desperately need a real live man
To make me cum you see.
One who can hear me
and answer my plea.

Of harder...faster...deeper
That makes me scream his name.
Someone who will fill this void
and my lust try to tame.



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  • T-Dizzle Mcnizzle
    March 8, 2009

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    hmmmmm....what to say...what to say.The underlining sexual frustration in this piece is evident,lol. Very good indeed!

  • liltxgirl
    January 25, 2009
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    wow that was great such imagination.


  • gllarso
    January 5, 2009
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    Beautifully written as always, though this time with a touch of tragedy and longing...it is no less erotic. So how does one volunteer for the possition? And is it still available?

    Oh, on line 14, I think you might consider replacing "my" with "me": "it can't give ME any lip"


    -Garrett

  • mcfreeman
    January 5, 2009
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    You say the nicest things


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    January 4, 2009

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    Lustful write that sets the fire of desire burning in my mind . I will have dreams of having my world rocked as i linger in the lines of promised pleasure
    you have penned so well.

    Bravo


  • Blueskywonder
    January 4, 2009
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    "smokin"

    tHis is quite intense and you needs reverberate excitement allover my senses. I realy liked the way this ended also. Very honest... very passionate*rose(

    now back to buisness. Who are you? where are you?
    only playin', i'm scared of you anyway)

    Nice Write

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