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Tan Beauty!!


Tan curls of threads 
Sewing gowns of silk
For snow-white beauty,
Dressed her naked skin
With bright shades of brown.

Piercing rays
Colored sheets of pure whiteness,
Temptations aroused with every glance
As the sun kissed her bare shoulders.

A contest entry

plz tell me what do you think??

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 4
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    A lot of color here -

    thanks for the entry.