1 year of curiosity
2 years of fun
3 years with velocity
4 years on the run
The 5th year is the best,
with joy,happiness,
and being blessed
with wonderful poems!
Author notes
For you! This was kinda random! Hope you like!
In a list
A contest entry
- Five is right out! by iamlost.
550 points, ended January 17, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations!
I like a lot! One of your best! It starts out so delightfully, builds perfectly, with the warmth of lines six and seven, and then there is that marvelous surprise ending in the last line!
-Jornada/Big Gat
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I like your poem. I think its nice. Thanks for letting me on the CatRp.
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Bravo!
This was well written and very creative. The rhyme, rythem and flow is right on too.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Robert
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wow, this is cute and would be good for a five year old's birthday, too, if you changed poems to "friends" or "a home" or something. Congrats on the Gold.
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This is quite cheerful and encouraging! Hope I make it to five years as well!
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What a nice write and sentiment! Random is good...
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Thank you for this super poem. It might interest you to compare your poem with one by A.A. Milne (creator of Winnie the Pooh) called "Now we are Six".
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wow! great work! Its amazing how much people can do with few words, even though I hate rhyme, This poem was cool!
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Aww, thank you! I love it, the rhyme and flow are really good, and the short length is perfect: these lines really say it all. My favorite part is. . . hmm, the entire poem! I really can't pick a part: it's all amazing.
Thanks for a wonderful first entry, and good luck in the contest!
~lost
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