The night sky gleams as life is enlightened,
A small prayer floats amid the silent whistling trees.
Innocent eyes meet filthy fate as her voice fades away,
A shallow stream trickles while soundless sorrow builds.
Strong tendencies flee a mindless soul, as a timid reality presents itself.
A robin fights to draw her babies into the frostbitten nest,
As clouds float in a raining sky, and the silver lining disappears
A contest entry
- 12 lines or less by Melissa Gayle.
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Alyemo17
Very dark but very deep I like it keep up the good work it touch me in away like no other -
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Thank you very much for looking at it. I am glad you liked it!
Have a good day.
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