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Larry the Lonely Loon !

  Larry the Lonely Loon


W. Peter Sanci Jan. 4 / 2009


Well hi there once again my dear dear friends.
It’s the story of Larry the lonely loon.
Larry was a very lonely loon , who sat on the water pinning all day for a cute
little mate.
All poor Larry did all day long, was to cry a sad tune across the lake hoping that his true love would answer back.
Day after day poor Larry would continue to sing his sad lament.
But there was no answer at the other end of his cry.
Then one day, out of the blue, he heard a faint, cry out in the distance.
Was this the mate he longed for at last.


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He hurried over to the other side of the lake wher he thought the sound had come from.
And there to his amazement was a beautiful female loon.
“ I heard you’re cry and came a running.” Larry exclaimed out of breathe as he was zing back and forth.
“ Hi, my name is Linda,” said the cute lady loon.
Well it looks like Larry’s problems are over friend’s !
I hope they will be happy for the rest of their lives.
The End.









Author notes

Option 10 anything goes. I drew a sketch of a loon nand the poem practicaly wrote iitslef. I hoep you al enjoy it,

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  • Thendestinystruck
    January 5, 2009

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    ok...i was not expecting this but i think it is absolutley adorable!

    Thank you so much for entering!

    • Pietro456
      May 3, 2009
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      Thendestinysuck !

      Why thanks so much for you veyr kind words. I try to be different. Every once in a while !

  • Pietro456
    January 4, 2009
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    Just for Fun !