Keen-hearted like this ice shatter
and joyless like the stars
(sucking the cold from the heaving air);
caught in the aberration of brilliance
we fall.
Author notes
I was walking in the evening and... pop! Inspiration at last!!
A contest entry
- 12 lines or less by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended January 4, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I love when inspiration comes when you least expect it.
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