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Winter Babes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On this day, not so long ago,
a poet born, a pen set free.
My twin Sis, shines January's glow
a winter babes own pedigree,
the warmth amid the hallowed snow,
nature blessed her heart with love's flame.
Just one last thing before I go
Have a great day Sis, from this dame.

Love ya Sis.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 4
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    beautiful

    A very sweet piece, told with a smooth effortless flow..excellent work my friend..


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 4

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    This is beautiful Sis, thank you, but I didn't realise your birthday was yesterday as well...all the best poets were born in the first week of a new year

    With love

    Suz, your Sis
    XXXXXXXXXXX


    • Ceridwens Soul silver member
      January 4
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      My pleasure my younger twin lmao, seeing you is only 29 Sis.

      I am accidently january being 6 weeks prem I think even then I had the romance of a stone i just wanted to avoid valentines.

      But all the warm hearts are born in the winter thats for sure.

      Winter babe hugs


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 4

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    For one daughter of Janus to another, great stuff

    lovely poetry for a special friend




    Jeff

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