Withering weeds wasted while water would not follow.
Why water remains unpresent at my windowsill is why I whine while life withholds.
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 22. by KyleBerg.
875 points, ended January 4, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Haha, the alliteration seems a tiny bit over-the-top to me but it still works ok. A bit of a tricky concept to wrap my head around here but I think it has a nice little message.
Thanks for entering
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O well, to each his own i suppose
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