Musical chairs in reverse;
Overabundance a curse.
A myriad of choices
Coaxed by whispering voices.
Childhood's suddenly burst.
Author notes
Picture credit: Auditorium for Souls by rosiehardy @ flickr
In a list
A contest entry
- #40 PICTURE INSPIRED (: by Walk-Free.
700 points, ended January 7, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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especially love the opening line... really captures the reader's curiosity!
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very well done . . congrats on the bronze !!
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Thanks again for reading and commenting.
Mike
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loved the flow of this write. the last line put a stamp on this. very nice.
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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. It is one that I wrote on the spot upon seeing the prompt.
Mike
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Beautiful. I enjoyed the rhyme
Congratulations on the Bronze
Love,
Ylova
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my poem. I am glad that you liked the rhyme. It is much appreciated.
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brilliant rhyme!
this was so cleverly done; i really admire your talent of rhyming, and yet, still being able to keep it all together!
thanks and all the best
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Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I enjoyed the contest. The first line popped into my head as soon as I saw your picture prompt. Thank you for the bronze cup. It is very much appreciated.
Mike
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mm nicely done tho i barely understood lol sorry brain malfunction hahha... nicely penned... good luck!
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I am glad you enjoyed the way it was written. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Mike
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Musical chairs in reverse? Nice, my kids would be so damn confused they would probably sit down and cry lol. I really enjoyed this piece. It is simply amazing.Gypsy
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I am glad you enjoyed this. It was my favorite line too. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Mike
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wonderful
very well done
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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Mike
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musical chairs in reverse .... I am sooo gonna try that one on the kids
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Haha. I am glad you enjoyed it. You are a sadist. Those poor kids will be messed up for life. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Heyyyy I blame you, It was all your Idea I'm just gonna implement it heheh
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I do not accept any responsibility for messed up kiwi kids.
Mike
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Love it.
I love the imagery of 'musical chairs in reverse' --
This poem speaks a lot of truth.
Well done
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I am glad you enjoyed the poem. The line that you liked popped into my head as soon as I saw the image. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated.
Mike
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I am surprised no one has commented on this yet. This is very true and it happens alot,Great write,Regards Hazel
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It had not been posted long when you saw it. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Mike
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