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More Than Friends, Never Lovers

I was the girl
you spent
wild and wasted
mornings
too early
with.

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We never talked about the things that happened between us, expect for that one time.

Friends.

A contest entry

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  • sense surreal gold member
    January 17
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    love the title,

    I've been in this kind of relationship.


    Anna Lee

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 4
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    This is really well done, simple but its message is strong.


  • Byepolar bare
    January 4
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    Good to read from you again

    This is short and to the point, well within the contest parameters. That poem kind of reminds me of a song by the band Placebo called "every you every me" It can be frustrating to be in that situation, but such is life sometimes. Just gotta be more selective I guess.