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A Walk To Remember

I’m walking through these city streets
and I
wonder if you even miss me
and I
wonder if you even care...
I’m hanging on to fears and doubts
But I
Never meant to scream and shout
It’s just
One of those things you can’t control...
As I’m walking down these city streets
I
wonder if you think of me
and I
wonder what we might have been before...
If I never put my two feet in the door...

Chorus
Would you have been the best that I thought you could be?
Would you have been there to write this story with me?
Would it have mattered at all?
Would you have run ten miles in my shoes if I told you that they gave me bruises?
Would you have turned your eyes, blind?

I don’t know for sure, but I do know one thing,
I wish I didn’t have to end the story
But the ending’s one that I’ll know forever.
You were one of my long walks to remember.

Author notes

Just a song I wrote last night. Still working on it though!

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  • Antipodi
    January 4
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    Yo Sarah where yah bean ..cool write ...its still rockin in my head ..hows things?


    • xSarahx
      January 4
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      Thanks for the comment, Anti! Umm... I was very busy with school, non-stop working, studying, and I was sick (in my stomach) for a while... On and off since March. Hospital tests and junk, and then I got better around October and it was okay until November, December, but I just got sick again with the flu (Sure enough right for Christmas) and now it's in my stomach again so I don't know what's happening lol...
      What about you? How've you been? Did you enjoy the holidays?
      I hope everything went well for you! I go back to school for my next semester tomorrow and I'll probably take intersession and summer school to try to get a year ahead, and cut the competition, so I'll be on the go as of tomorrow probably for another year - can't wait until I graduate. Sheesh!
      But I'm really glad you enjoyed this piece, it popped in my head and woke me up, I couldn't sleep until I wrote it out.
      Take care!