The darkness has started to seep back in
Sealing away the light once again
To forever prolong my sentence of pain and sadness
Music is getting harder to listen to
Sleeping more
Hoping that the days will eventually stop
Wishing one day I can just die in my sleep
I can’t say no one will miss me
But people would get over it in a day or two
Everyday asking my self why I am still living
Why must other people have to die who don’t deserve to?
Why can’t people who deserve to die just go?
Dreams of death have come back
Mostly every night
I’ve had thoughts of telling people my feelings
I don’t want to be a bother
Just another kid who complains about his life
People who need help should get it
Not people who want help
Like me
A contest entry
- Give Me Anything (PW Allowed) by swimmeroks.
900 points, ended January 6, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Loneliness by Cyclical.
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i like this one good flow
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srry ppl this one is depressing,,,, but most of mine are,,, srry
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ooh nooo. a depressing poem. dont be depressed! pwease. i hope nothing BIG is bothering you, well whatever it is, you have the strength to get over it, i'm sure! so try to keep a smile on alright
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thanks for the comment
smiling
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Bryan u were right i can tell ur depressed..i would care if u were gone and i bet ur GF would too..i'm here if u need to talk and ur definatly not a bother.. This is another amazing poem so when r u publishing ur book of poetry?
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dont know if i replied to this comment earlyer... but thanks alot for the comment... it really helps... and u would be one of the first people i would talk to... thanks
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This feels so real. The reference to "I can't say no one will miss me, But people would get over it in a day or two."
That was the best line. It shows so much pain and the way that we can so easily feel as though we don't really matter.
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thanks so much
hey thanks for the comment it really means alot to me... thanks alot
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hey um thanks to whoever reads my poem... im srry its not that great. please give me some tips... thanks
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