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they didn't understand me.

i made them all go,
disappear.
i am watching you,
fear?
if i were you,
i'd run away.

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Picture credit: Auditorium for Souls by rosiehardy @ flickr

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  • Tqop
    February 26
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    Sad, but good:

    I love it.
    It so perfect.


  • Walk-Free
    January 7

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    there is a slight brokeness to the poem here. which made it eerie, in a way.

    the ending fitted the picture very well