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seeds unsown

silence

spreads its weary limbs
on broken plains

its burden placed on shoulders
of aesthetics and passersby




regret

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  • Walk-Free
    January 7

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    i loved how you started ht epoem with a word and did the same for the ending.

    and these 2 words, silence and regret, tied the whole poem together to be a package of beautiful words.

    thanks for entering and all the best