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Am I To BE

Am I to be
but one
the last lonely face
billowing through misty fog
searching for
what should have been
empty fields
and  musical chairs
lovers once embracing
dancing to lovers thoughts
now
just a memory
and I now
shall dance to my own tune
the tune of lonely tears
searching for lost thoughts.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    January 4

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    LOVELY!!!!

    Ah, this is a beautiful take on this picture!'s Just looking at the picture I can feel her thinking this way.