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Her bête noire



Myriads of
frosted veins
interweave,
hindering
crimson rivers
of life
as his subtle
eyes drew closer,
gripping her by fear.

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Prompt: Rope
20 Words
Picture Credit: http://thienbao.deviantart.com/art/Fear-19378698

bête noire : a person or thing that is especially dreaded.

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  • penman gold member
    January 11
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    Excellent

    Wow such great wording. So very visual. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Malabu
    January 6

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    a very daunting write
    as though fear has hands of it's own
    and the power to disrupt ones flow of life
    intense this is
    mal


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5

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    How brillant and very creative take on the prompt...well worth the wait...

    thank you for sharing...

    mystic


  • maralisa silver member
    January 4

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    wow a brilliant take onthe promt so powerful your words resinate the promt so beautifully good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • LionessK
    January 4
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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    January 4

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    Beautiful imagery! Your use of of words are superb in this piece! it shows the depth of you creativity!
    loved this!!

    Lovee,
    becca


  • Kari gold member
    January 4

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    The intensity in this short piece is very good. The emotions ooze out of the page making you feel like you are there in the moment watching it all take place and that would be a freaky thing to witness for sure. Shiver me timbers!


  • thejollytinker
    January 4

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    That picture will haunt me for days, Y. I liked the write- don't understand everything I know about it, but it just felt good! G


  • Joseph Hollis
    January 4

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    Asphyxiated by fear. This reminds me of one of those dreams where you are so afraid of something that you can't even move or scream. Nice job and best of luck.

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