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Lullaby

rest your Angelic halo on the beside table
let your little heart fly on white wings
with the help of my undying love

soar through constellations
as clear as glass
and never lose your hope

its gotten dark
and although you still shine like a star
your not nocturnal

close your innocent blue eyes
and let your hair splay out on the pillow
I'm not there in person

but I'm in your huge heart
and your in my thoughts
and I'll be watching over your dreams

its true my little Eloise
we might have been seperated
but I still love you
and your innocent eyes

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screen name broken bambi

Esme...or daughter or anythings

Eloise is my dads ex girlfriends daughter, so I wont get to see her again, i miss her, despite having a while to get over her..... If I was in your family, you would have this love and dedication

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  • MasterFoxFang
    March 29
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    Great

    well even though she is the ex and i hope the baby is doing fine and not hurt in any way just give it time and you will see her again i promise you that if you keep at it cause nothing stays away forever unless it's not meant to be k oh and i love this poem great work on it love it all.

  • *smiles*

    I'm glad you're the mother of my CyberSandChild lol
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  • I love this. It is so sweet and innocent. I'm sure Eloise misses you, too. It's always good to keep people in your heart even after they have left us. I love the description. Great write.


  • ZachP gold member
    January 4

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    aww ... that's so sweet =]
    I'm a little too sleepy to form a coherent thought, lol, but that's so sad, and I'm sorry that you won't be able to see Eloise again. Hopefully fate and serendipity will be on your side, and you'll get a chance to stee her again.

    And welcome to the family ^_^ When I wake up, I'll add you