Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

We Are One

Dream with me and sing with me,
let your heart beat
in sync with mine, because we're
one flesh
one mind
one soul
one song
of life and death
and love.

Let's ride out into the cosmos and great unknown beyond,
gliding on the lifestream flow our hearts pump out,
swirling and dancing in the intensity of our
mutual existence.

Author notes

I feel like I accidentally plagiarized someone...

A contest entry

Please read and comment.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6
  • Antebellum
    July 5, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    i like this.
    great write

    thanks so much for entering,
    good luck


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 11, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    i like this one... its has a certain gene se qua.

    best of luck in my contest.


  • wildflower. gold member
    February 1, 2009
    Edit | Reply

    Judged-ola!

    heheh marvelously done


  • wildflower. gold member
    January 6, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    Oooooh great piece! Wow I haven't seen you around in a LONG time. haha, well I haven't been on here in a long time You used to comment on my old stuff *XxShadows DevinexX*

    Anywayz! Great job on this piece. Love the structure. Great imagery and flow too! Bravo!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Walk-Free
    January 6, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    please re-read the rules! 10 lines only

    but i enjoyed reading this.

    "in sync with mine, because we're
    one flesh
    one mind
    one soul
    one song
    of life and death
    and love."

    great stuff


  • Pandorea
    January 5, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    beautiful

1 - 6 of 6