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Death Call To Me

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Storm passes and yet I feel,
tidal flow beckon to me.
The only peace I shall find,
is neath the dark cold sea.

Dare not waste another day,
or let this moment pass.
Already have drowned in tears,
a shattered heart of glass.

Dare not stay another moment,
the pain has come to great.
Now I know what I must do,
the sea shall be my fate.

Dare not grieve for me anyone,
love was not meant to be.
Soon all of this sorrow I feel,
will be gone, set free.


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  • SoulWhispher
    January 5, 2009

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    Another wonderfull poem that is a most certain contest winner, you have woven magic, love with blessings John


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 5, 2009
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      Another lovely comment John. Thank you for stopping and reading. Glad you enjoyed. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 4, 2009

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    Sad and yet beautiful at the same time
    Heartache has been captured with your words
    Well done In showin the emotion In the picture
    Two thumbs up and ticks all the boxes


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 5, 2009
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      Thank you for this wonderful comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy


  • Ademon
    January 4, 2009

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    I can feel the sadness of a broken love...thank you for sharing this, this was truly heartfelt and sincere... Best wishes in this contest!


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 5, 2009
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      Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Bob Fox
    January 4, 2009

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    Interesting

    For as I read I see a picture of a damsel spilling her body into the dark sea and I sigh, reach for her and she slips away into the blackness.


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 5, 2009

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      Thank you Bob. You always know what I am thinking as I write my poetry. Sigh. Yes this was a sad one I wrote on a sad afternoon. I always appreciate your thoughts. Take care. Bless You, Sandy


  • serenity silvermoon gold member
    January 4, 2009

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    I know know what I must do i think you ment i now know what i must do and the pain hascome to great i think you need a space between the has come part but other then that it was a very heart felt poem and very beautiful you pen this oh so well keep up the great work


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 4, 2009
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      Thank you for the nice coment. I was just going over it. I fixed it. Take care, Sandy

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