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For An Angel

I'm not sure how to say this but,
The sweetest words are already taken,
Time has already started a cut,
To the wild open world but I'm in heaven,

I love you are just three words,
Invented by someone whom no one might know,
Running down in circles, in thirds,
Forever a mystery but that's not how I go,

Your eyes fascinate me that everywhere I go,
The same thing happens but never gets old,
I thought this is something you should know,
Since I met you my life open up a hundredfold,
Now I'll give up everything I have for you,
For an angel whom I can forever be true,

I'm never a talker but my actions speak,
The lightness of my arms when I wrap it around you,
When I hold your hand and kiss your cheek,
I belong to your heart and never will bid adieu.

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  • second-born
    January 17
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    'Your eyes fascinate me that everywhere I go,
    The same thing happens but never gets old...' this is such a lovely piece...I think it is very sincere and the emotions are really coming from someone who's so in love...napakaromantiko talaga nating mga Pinoy!!! God bless kabayan!!!


  • Emerald-Eyes
    January 4

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    This is a really lovely piece of writing I like the idea that your actions say 'I love you' better then actual words sometimes.